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STH _bedtime 1 by missyuna STH _bedtime 1 by missyuna
Someone requested me to post that comic I made which I have not posted here yet, "Shadow The hedgehog: Bedtime", since I made it only for the video, but I thought what the heck and decided to upload it here, just so u can get a closer look on the pictures.

I also noticed someone mentioned that the panels in the video were kinda squeezed, but I don't blame the maker of the video, because the panels were too big to be fitted in the video, which I was not aware of ^^'

I made this comic in Paint tool SAI(A very handy program if I do so say myself XP) and I used textures that I have installed from someone who I don't the remember name of^^'.

Also I would like to know your opinion about this comic , come with any critiques if you like, because I will be very pleased to look at your critiques*and I know there's a lot to critic here XD*
My next "project" will be about Sonic generations, so I gotta start working on it, and hopefully I'll get it finished tomorrow XS

If you want to see the dialouge of this comic, go and watch the video here by clicking on this link( Btw, what do you guys think about the new look on the Youtube cause I pretty much dislike it :XD:?)
Anyways, I wanna thank you guys for watching this silly comic in the video : P.
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I love how everything fits together perfectly- like a puzzle. The shading is perfect, the tones make this look professional, and Maria looks absolutely stunning. As I am unable to see the video at the moment, I have absolutely no clue what is going on, but you'll post text later, right? The first few panels look like the ones from your earlier comic where Shadow asks were babies come from. I love how a great number of your comics are about life on the ARK before GUN had to come in and screw things up... Overall, great work, and I am happy to have you on my watch list.
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MephilesTheDark2182 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Here's my critique:

Visual Appeal: 5 of 5 - The art style you used - though simple - is incredibly nice to look at. Each and every character looks incredibly well-done, especially Maria.

Originality: 5 of 5 - C'mon, do I REALLY need to explain this one??

Story And/Or Characters: 4.5 of 5 - The way that the characters are portrayed is absolutely brilliant, dare I say that in Maria's case, you went BEYOND what SEGA themselves have given us. You took a character who has been relatively static in all of her appearances, and injected so much more life into her than what she is usually given. The same goes for Shadow, though admittedly his sudden attitude swing was a LITTLE strange to me, but meh...

Overall Rating: 5 of 5 - Amazingly easy-to-look-at visuals, combined with a truly original story, and a cast of incredibly well-portrayed characters makes this a gem amongst most fanfiction of today.La la la la 
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Shadowgirlfan Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014
can you please add text to it? :(
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505nochez Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013   Artist
awwwwww
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:iconimansattarzadeh:
Imansattarzadeh Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
Can you nomber the screens? It's a bit confiosing....
But it's nice
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xDragonMuffins Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I watched the video and It so funny!Plus,Shadow is so cute when he asks Maria about the flower!HE'S SO NICE!!!!Anyways.Great comic!:3
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cfruge444 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012
If there are such things, I think Black Doom just needs to let Shadow have Maria and settle down with a female face-hugger.;P Oh, I also find it cute and funny that Shadow and Maria sleep with dolls of each other.:aww::giggle:
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SuujiiSan Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
In that panel where Doom's Eye says "I'm a genius", he reminds me a bit of :iconpatrickstarplz: XD
And that face deserves a plz account :la:
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Carrot-the-Cancer Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012
YOUR SONIC ART IS AMAZING!!
I USALLY DON'T LIKE SONIC ART SINCE IM A TROLL AND ALL BUT YOUR ART IS HESTERICAL AND SPECTACULAR!! KEEP UP YOUR AMAZING WORK BECAUSE YOUR ART IS WORTH MAKING!

GREAT JOB.

-Karkat Vantas/Carrot-the-Cancer
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metallicalover29 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012
the video was adorable and most importantly epic
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:iconteirra-misaki:
Teirra-Misaki Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Student General Artist
aww Shadows so adorable! lol
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:iconerine-chan98:
Erine-chan98 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I bet Maria's reading a book about Earth :XD: Anyway,..Great job..It's so sweet :)
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Jordy2000 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011
i like the of is on YouTube [link]
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:iconjordy2000:
Jordy2000 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011
I love the Video on YouTube[link]
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olgolugo Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD DAATTTT CATFISHHHHHHHHHHHH
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Numbuh1234 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Shadow759!!!
I dislike the new look on YouTube as well!
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:iconshadowgirlfan:
Shadowgirlfan Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011
ah no, this is without text. then this is as useless as the video with no sound -.-
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:iconmissyuna:
missyuna Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
oh the video has the sound : O
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:iconshadowgirlfan:
Shadowgirlfan Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011
but not my computer ;_;
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:iconmissyuna:
missyuna Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
oh :(, well maybe I'll put some texts on it later ^^
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Shadowgirlfan Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011
that would be great
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Shadowgirlfan Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011
cool then I don't need to watch the video. (is anyway a bit hard without sound xD)
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Ferretfox Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011
I'm glad you posted this, so I can see your lovely artwork more clearly. ^^

The part in the video when Shadow lies down after the kiss almost looks like animation!
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Jello124 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011   Artist
I loved the video. That's when I first saw it. It was so cute and a little sad.
I enjoy your art so much Missyuna! :heart:
He does such a great job a narrating your comics.
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shadow759 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
ah yeah I was wondring if people notice if the pictures was squeezed XD it's mostly because all the photos were different sizes, so I had no choice because it will look odd in video lol.
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Jane-the-Unknowing Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Student Writer
This is soo cute!! I love how you draw Maria!!!
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SilentMortal Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011
So the only way to know the dialogue now is to watch the video? Well that sucks. Now people have no other choice but to watch the video to understand the comic. Which is a shame to the people who simply want to read the comic, Like me.

I don't like the voice-acting video's, because the voices don't fit the character's IMO. But at least i was able to ignore them.

I realize that this comic was made for the sole purpose of the video itself, but would it have killed you to add dialogue here? Consider this as my critique on this. I dunno if come off as rude, but that's how usually critiques go anyway, their harsh, but honest. and mostly based on opinions, like mine.
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Auroblaze Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Yay you posted the pages!!!:la:
I love this so much,it's so adorable seeing the affection between Maria and Shadow and pet's expressions are so funny X'D
Awesome job! :hug::heart:>w<

p.s.oh btw yeah I don't like too the new look of youtube,I find it...weird...XD
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Frostria Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I hade 170 DA watch messeges. this is the only one I looked at! I love your comics so much yours and idol3341!!!
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missyuna Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thank u, I love :iconidol3341: works too, they're simply badass :glomp:
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Frostria Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yay!!!! For You and Idol!!! :party:
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kefron Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
adorable :heart:
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SMDKFan Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011
Oh shadow's so cute^^
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animeluver71552yay Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I need friends :(
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JakZak Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011
Oh no, Shadow's without Maria-NOT. ;D
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I actually like how YouTube doesn't have the Bar on the Bottom of the Video taking up the Visual Space like it used to, so I'm not bothered by the New Look, Yet. ;p
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EmoAngelfox Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Student General Artist
What a sad story. I really love Shaod759's work and when you partner you two together its like Aweosmeness!
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Rogerregorroger Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
Amazing shading use as usual.
For some reason, DA doesn't let me see it in close up tough, that sucks..
Guess I better download it.
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missyuna Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Probably because the file is so big,so it probably takes time to load,but I guess now u can watch it in full now

And thanks = )
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CrnSal Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011
I love your comic and your video!!:heart: ^^
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Sierra627 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011
i love this so much. and i loved the video, too XD
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gamefanPPG Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Hobbyist
I also love your comics too :la:

But I m not english native talk, so is kinda hard for me listen the english instead read it. :) Would be nice you do have the comic with text too, if you can and want. :D
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mino-the-cat Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Student Digital Artist
this is sooo awesome!!! <3<3
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MBBoxen Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Hobbyist
nevermind i worked it out :D
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MBBoxen Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Hobbyist
i don't know how to read this!! do i start reading from the left- down or right -down?? XD
i'm not looking at the whole comic cause then i'll spoil it T^T
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BaratheThornNinja Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Student Writer
I knew Doom's eye had a weird sleeping place (found him in my closet the other day)
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Tonythunder Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011
Aww this looks so adorable! :aww: love the various expressions on Shadow here!
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Suuz-chan Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011
amazing artwork as always!:heart: You're so good at these! :la:
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Geemoney1022 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
That was hilarious. Pet had me cracking up. Shadow759 is a good voice actor.
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gonzalo75 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011
I love this comic, it just looks so good! I think you did a fantastic job! (Oh, and Shadow saying "I need friends" itīs just...Amazing XD)
But what i especially like about this is all the expressions you gave Maria (and also how fun it is X3).
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AlexR19 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011
This is adorable.
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JamesmanTheRegenold Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
okay, I can't help it.

YOU DRAW MARIA TOO CUTE!! =TTwTT=
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